Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Outline

Literature Review:

Paragraph 1 Summarize Main Source: Start Something That Matters by Blake Mycoskie

(this maybe more than one paragraph)

-How did the idea of TOMS came about?

-What does TOMS do?

Paragraph 2 Summarize Secondary Source: TOMS Web Site

-Compare and contrast to 1st source

Paragraph 3 Summarize USA article about TOMS

-Compare and contrast to 1st and 2nd source

Paragraph 4 Summarize One Day without Shoes article

-Compare and contrast to 1st, 2nd and 3rd main sources

Continue on with other minor sources.

Essay:

Topic: TOMS

Precise opinion: TOMS is a good organization that helps those in poverty by providing shoes, books, glasses, eye surgery, and now food for children who could contract diseases from infections in the ground.

Paragraph 1-6: Restating idea of TOMS and how it came about. Including personal opinion which reinforces that the company is for the good of others. (Have research that backs up such claims)

Paragraph 7: Introduce the idea of those against TOMS and why they are against TOMS

1 comment:

  1. Notes:

    I'm not sure that you have a debatable issue yet because you're still informing me in your thesis. I want to more about the controversies surrounding TOMS' business strategies and their effectiveness.

    You will need a section in your lit review that discusses the differing viewpoints on those controversies.

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